There are 3 basic elements of good storytelling. First, you need a compelling plot. You need to tell a story about someone wanting something badly. There is a need to fill, a situation they desire to change or a state of affairs they need to restore. Usually it is something that the characters want to make better, either for themselves or for others. And it has to be something that the reader desires to see play out.
Then you need compelling characters. You need people who are admirable or amusing or likeable or even someone you love to hate. A hero needs a powerful villain to make his triumph that much more satisfying, which is why Batman has such a memorable rogues gallery. But if there is no villain, the reader needs to have an emotional reason to care about the characters and to want to spend time with them.
Finally, you need good world building. If you set your story in the real world, it needs to feel authentic. If instead an author is creating an alternate world or reality for a fantasy or science fiction story, they need to make it seem plausible and just as real as our world. This alternate world may be better than ours or worse or simply different but it needs to be interesting.
Great authors are good at all three of these elements, making memorable characters caught up in a compelling plot set in a fascinating environment. Then there are popular authors that are good at a couple of these things. Some are best at creating characters and settings, though their plots tend to meander. Some thriller writers make clockwork plots that sweep you along through their world so fast that you don't realize how implausible it is. Some science fiction and fantasy authors create incredible worlds though their characters are simply cardboard pieces to move the plot along. In fact some of these fantasy worlds are so interesting that readers wish to live in them. But not if they think very long and hard about what it would be like to be part of them.
You wouldn't want to live in a world with superheroes. You wouldn't want to live in Gotham because it would mean that crime is so bad that the cops can't handle it and need Batman to take care of the supervillains. You wouldn't want to live in Metropolis because the constant threats of supersmart villains like Lex Luthor or threats from space like General Zod would make ordinary life hazardous. Similarly you wouldn't want to live in the Marvel universe because you never know when magical villains like Dormammu or cosmic villains like Galactus would attack. And none of these superheroes could solve real world problems, like income inequality, bigotry, our healthcare system, or the political polarization that keeps us from fixing these things.
Why do we create stories about heroes and alternate worlds? To make sense of the world we live in. Parts of our world are very good: love, beauty, pleasure and natural laws that make most of life predictable. But parts of our world are not, like pain, disease, and death. They seem chaotic. How can we reconcile these opposites? The oldest recorded story is the Epic of Gilgamesh, about a legendary king's quest for immortality after his good friend Enkidu dies. Eventually he learns that everyone dies. It is a fact of life. And yet there is something in humanity that makes it hard for us to accept. Why is that?
The Bible says it's because that was not the original plan. In Genesis, we read, “The Lord God made all kinds of trees grow from the soil, every tree that was pleasing to look at and good for food. Now the tree of life and the tree of the knowledge of good and evil were in the middle of the orchard.” (Genesis 2:9) Notice that the tree of life is mentioned first. But we all know this story. Humans instead picked the forbidden fruit which promised knowledge that would make them like God. (Genesis 3:4-5) Knowledge is power. It is the ability to understand and therefore to try to control things and if possible people. This story is telling us that humans often choose power instead of things that enhance life. The result is that within a few generations, “The earth was ruined in the sight of God; the earth was filled with violence.” (Genesis 6:11) Violence seems to be the easiest way to try to control other people. Yet violence only begets more violence. And if we look at the world, our biggest problems are caused by those who try to control others by violence, or, if that is not possible, by deception and manipulation.
But we know that the world need not be this way. When we cooperate rather than fight with one another, we can accomplish amazing things. We can build things like the pyramids. Contrary to popular belief, they were not built by slaves. Archaeologists have found evidence that they were built by a paid skilled workforce who were provided with housing, food and medical care. More importantly, when we cooperate we can create and maintain systems that deliver things like food and medicine and disaster workers to other parts of the country or other parts of the world. If all the people who cooperate stopped doing so, our lights would go out, our water would stop flowing through our pipes, our stores would soon empty of food, our hospitals would cease to function. We would be reduced to living in a world that existed before the industrial revolution but without the basic skills to do so. Our backyard gardens would not sustain us for long. Our first aid skills would not keep us healthy once antibiotics and other medicines were no longer being manufactured. The idea that the average person could survive an apocalyptic collapse of society for very long is a fantasy. We need each other.
So why do we endanger everything by our destructive and self-destructive acts when we know it is better to cooperate and treat one another fairly? That is the question. In the stories we create, it is the bad guys who cause the problem. Which is why a lot of our most popular stories are about good guys stopping the bad guys. The detective finds and stops the serial killer. The superhero finds and stops the supervillain. The good magician stops the supernaturally evil being that is invading this world. If we just get rid of those bad guys, everything would be perfect. But would it?
One of the things that a lot of people in the Keys do is check the Sheriff's website daily to see if anyone they know got arrested. They find mugshots of their neighbors or their coworkers or their teachers or their friends. While some of them are there for callously harming others in the pursuit of their desires, for the most part they are people who got drunk or high, got into fights or were disruptive, or entered places they shouldn't, or drove cars when they shouldn't have, or sold what they shouldn't have. And those things may have caused damage to themselves or others, not to mention damage to their relationships with their friends and families afterwards. But our prisons and jails are not bursting with criminal masterminds bent on dominating or destroying the world. They are filled primarily with ordinary people accused or convicted of doing bad things.
When you read or listen to the news, you also hear of people doing bad things, but what they did is not necessarily illegal. They start wars, or unnecessarily raise prices though their companies are making billions in profit, or deny healthcare claims to protect their profits. Or they knowingly sell products that are harmful to people or the environment, or convince people that traditional medicine or vaccines are bad for them while selling their own supplements or their methods for controlling disease with the mind, or spread disinformation and hate to increase and keep their followers. Not all evil is illegal.
At the heart of what's wrong with human society is disregarding what God has said about how to think, speak and act in the world he created, while thinking we know better than he does. We keep looking for evil outside us and ignoring what is evil within. Jesus said, “For from within, out of the human heart, come evil ideas, sexual sins, thefts, murders, adulteries, greed, malice, deceit, debauchery, envy, slander, arrogance and foolishness.” (Mark 7:21-22) (How can foolishness be a sin? The Greek word means “thoughtless” or “without sense.” I think stupidity is a better translation. Ignorance is when you don't know any better. Stupidity is when you ought to know better. All children start out ignorant and that's why we teach them about the world. But you can only be stupid when you do something that you should have known was wrong and would backfire on you or other people. Often stupidity and arrogance go hand in hand. In practice, stupidity can do almost as much damage as deliberate evil.)
If the problem is in the human heart then that's where the problem solving must start. And just as the world's best cardiac surgeon cannot operate on his own heart, we need someone other than ourselves to give us a new heart. And who better than our Creator?
God deals with it by first limiting the damage we can do. In Genesis, after we learn how to pervert God's gifts and use them to harm rather than to help, God bars us from gaining everlasting life. (Genesis 3:22-24) He will not let us loose on creation as evil immortals. But God intended us to live with him forever. So he must deal with the eternal spiritual consequences of our sins. On the cross, Jesus, God incarnate, takes upon himself those consequences. Because of that, no one who has done bad things needs to suffer those consequences if they turn from their sin to Jesus and start a new life of trusting in him.
And those who put their trust in him receive his Spirit, the Spirit of God, to change their hearts and free them from the power of sin in their lives. It is a process that requires us to keep in contact with God through prayer and worship, through a loving supportive community seeking him, and by feeding our minds with God's written word and our spirits with his living Word, Jesus Christ, by feeding on him in our hearts with faith as the body of Christ shares the body and blood of Christ. And thus fortified, we are to go out into the world to spread the good news of Jesus through our words and through our works, demonstrating the reality of God's love and forgiveness and healing in our lives.
Because we are the only animals who tell stories and learn through stories, God has revealed these truths in a story. It is a love story, the story of how the God who is love created a world and filled it with people who had the ability to choose to love him back. When they instead use that ability to choose not to do so, God decides to bring them back to him. He works through imperfect people like Abraham, Moses, David and the prophets to give us glimpses of what he is like. But then God enters the story himself through Jesus to show us more fully who he is and what he is like. Though he is killed by those who prefer power and the use of violence, he returns to life to share his eternal life with those who use their ability to choose to trust and follow him. He sends his Spirit into them to heal, help and guide them as they grow closer to him in their thoughts, words and deeds.
This story has it all: good and evil, heroes and villains, poetry and drama, tragedy and comedy, history and parables, words of wisdom and songs of love and praise. It is filled with memorable characters, a charismatic hero, and a compelling plot that spans the ages. And it has a great ending. In the last book of the Bible, just when everything is going wrong and the world is falling apart, the hero returns to free his people from evil, bring justice and peace to the world, marry his bride, and live happily ever after with his grateful people in a kingdom that has no end. He even defeats a dragon. (Revelation 19-21) All of our favorite stories are merely copies of this, the greatest story ever told.
But this is not set in an alternate universe. This is our world and we are living in the latter part of the story. Just as D-Day was the beginning of the end of the Nazi domination of Europe, what happened on the cross and at the empty tomb signals the beginning of the end of a world of people dominated by the evil in their hearts and minds. Like the Allies pushing across Europe, liberating towns and cities and countries, we are spreading the good news of how Jesus frees us from sin and death, and gathering followers to him. We are helping people use their skills and gifts to heal and repair the damage we've done to ourselves and others and the damage we've done to our relationship with the God who never gave up on us but conquered death to save us.
We think in stories. We see our lives as stories. They can be small stories, unconnected to anything significant or lasting. Or they can be part of a larger story, a story of redemption, of transformation, of new life and a new world waiting to be born. We can be part of the hero's band of merry men, of his knights in armor of light, of his servants who go into the streets and alleys and bring all they can, including the destitute, the disabled and the despised, to enjoy the wedding banquet of our triumphant King.